Rough copy - Miss Miller

As a group we had created a rough copy which we then presented to our class and teachers along with a powerpoint explaining why each element was used within our opening sequence.

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3TFiGapK1e0

The purpose of creating our rough copy and then presenting it was to gain others peoples perspectives on how we could improve our opening sequence. The suggestions and criticisms we received were very constructive and helpful, for example some comments said;

• More sound effects should be used to create a larger impact on the audience.
• The editing should be faster to build up the suspense.

We took the comments on board and decided to add more sound and speed up the editing, this has made our opening sequence a lot more professional and conventional to the thriller genre. We added in a constant soundtrack within the background of our sequence that begins when the killer is first seen, this is used to emphasis the danger of the character. We also added in sound effects to enhance things such as the footsteps through the forest which are loud due to the build up of suspense, we also added in a heartbeat sound effect for the victim during the chase scene to relate to the audience as they all have a heartbeat that they have experienced fasten in scary situations.

We also received positive comments such as;

• Very clear narrative
• Good variety of camera angles
• Well presented credits

The positive comments made us realise what not to change within our opening sequence, because of this we carried on presenting our credits in similar ways to keep pleasure for the audience. The feedback we received was very helpful as it was from people who fit into our target audience, as they are in the age group of 16-17, therefore we have made our opening sequence suitable for our specific audiences pleasures. 

Planning editing styles - Miss Georgiou

Editing is part of the creative post-production process of filmmaking, and is used to connect to the audience by creating different emotional responses. Editing is important because it can change the whole atmosphere of the film, e.g. a very fast edited sequence will create a lot of excitement and a very slow edited sequence will create suspense. 

Within our opening sequence we will use many editing effects to help set the narrative and connect to the audience. One main editing style we will use will be timing of shots, this is when within the editing stage some shots are either edited slower or quicker to add emotional impact or to create suspense. This is a very useful editing style to use as it can can be used in many different situations within the sequence, for example; quicker editing when the girl is being chased to create suspense and slower editing when the girl is hiding to create an emotional impact towards the character. This will help connect to the audience as they will have an emotional connection towards the situation within the opening sequence. This editing style is conventional to the thriller genre as it creates emotional responses that all conventional thriller films create, for example; suspense is a very big emotion desirably created throughout all thriller films and it will created throughout our opening sequence.

Another editing style that we would focus on within our opening sequence would be the kuleshov effect, which is when two shots are put together to give the audience a third meaning. This effect would be used when the girl is first being followed, the audience can see the girl being nervous and worried and they can see the killer behind her with a hammer. From this they receive a third meaning that he wants to follow her and kill her, this is a third meaning that they have assumed. This editing style will help connect the audience to our opening sequence, as they will be interested in the narrative and characters. This editing style is conventional to the thriller genre as there is always mystery involved within thrillers to help create the three S's; suspense, shock and surprise. Thrillers aim to create these three S's as they entertain the audience which is the aim of all movies.

The third main editing effect we will use within our opening sequence will be the wipe, which is when one part of the screen moves away to wipe another. This will be used at the very end of our sequence when the phone is the only thing on the screen ringing, once the phone is wiped the end of the scene will suggest that the victims life has been taken. This will help connect to the audience as they now know the main focus of the film is the killer and they will want to carry on watching to see what happened to the victim and what the killer will do next. This editing style is conventional to the thriller genre as the wipe stereotypically represents death, which in this case represents the death of the female victim. Death is a major convention within thrillers because it create shock, which engages the audience to the rest of the narrative. 

Opening scene narration - Miss Miller

The narrative for our opening sequence is a teenage, blonde girl on her way home from her friends house, she enters an alley and then turns into a road, while the killer makes hes first appearance when he is revealed behind her.

• For this shot we used many different angles to establish the character and the setting, therefore we used mostly long shots and mid shots.
• The lighting used was a natural lighting as we was outside, however gradually the lighting became darker as the night approached.
• For the shot of the killer we used a long shot that helped create effect as he was in line with the victims body and as she turned away he began to hit hes hammer showing a very disturbed hidden agenda.

 She then begins to feel as if she is being followed, this makes her paranoid so she turns around to check and nobody is there however this does not ease her worry. She decides to cross the road and enter a field.

• For this shot we used handheld to create a jerky and unstable atmosphere as the victim is feeling very paranoid and unsafe. Other shots used are long shot and mid shots as the setting is constantly changing so we choses to keep establishing it.
• An editing affect is used on the handheld shot when the killer is watching the victim, this shows an unhinged behaviour from the killer.
• The lighting remains the same, natural from the surroundings, however as the victim is walking through the alley leaves and bushes block out a lot of light for form a mild aspect of low key lighting.

As she begins to enter the field she here's a loud noise from behind her, she turns around quickly to see there is the killer standing behind her dressed in all black, with hes face covered as he is holding a hammer.

• We used handheld again to make the transition of shots quicker and more effective to the audience, the audience also get to experience the victims perspective which helps create a relationship between the two.
• The camera is never held close or for a long period of time on the killer as we hoped this would create more mystery and keep hes identity hidden more effectively.
• The lighting is still natural to the setting and no extra light is being used from artificial sources.

 She decides to run further into a forest, while she keeps turning back to check for him and he is getting closer and closer, she then falls over a large stick and hides behind a tree.

• As she is running through the forest the last handheld shot is used, throughout the duration of the chase scene. This is used to create fear and suspense for the audience as they can see how close the killer is behind the victim and the struggle she faces trying to move fast through the forest.
• The lighting is beggining to get darker therefore low key lighting is being used. This creates danger and suspense for the audience watching.

 The killer walks in the opposite direction so suggest the victim will survive, however then killer grabs her and drags her from behind out of the camera view.

• The shots used now consist of mid shots and a close up. The close up is used when the victim is hiding and waiting for her chance to escape, her face is very distressed and worried therefore we chose to use a close up to highlight her emotions.
• The lighting at this point is very dark, the low key lighting makes the scene much more scary and conventional to the thriller genre.

The final scene is of her phone ringing again on the floor with her unable to pick up, this suggests she is dead.

• The shot used for this is a high angle which represents the killer having the superior power over the victim, the shot of the phone also suggest the victim has been murdered.
• The lighting is very dark to highlight the phones screen once it starts to ring.
• The ID of the person calling is anonymous, this is because it represents danger and also projects enigma as the identity of the caller is hidden which is simular to the killer.

We believe a lot of our improvements will be made through the editing stage, this is because our opening sequence involves a lot of different angles, shots and no sound. We will add in a lot of sound effects to enhance the noises of things such as; leaves crunching, heavy breathing and heartbeat, as this will create a lot more of an effect.

Risk assessment and filming schedule - Miss Georigou

 There was few possible hazards during filming our opening sequence which we took careful precautions to avoid, doing this is very important during production because it makes it easier and more efficient to record, here is our risk assessment table;

We also made a filming schedule which is very important as it is very helpful for us to follow and avoids being time consuming. Even though we did not follow the schedule exactly, we only made changes when we were unable to follow the directions for example when it became to dark to record because of this we had to change our originally planned ending. However we believe this could possibly benefit our opening sequence. Here is the filming schedule;

 

We made several changes in terms of our filming schedule, due to factors such as bad weather, when the weather was wet we could not film incase the next time we filmed the setting appeared vastly different due to the dry floor and dark sky. We also has to refilm due to the material we had was too dark to use, however there was a downside to this as the lighting change was not as accurate as it could have been. We also faced trouble as the leaves had fallen off the trees which we tried to work around so that it was not noticed by viewers.

Production roles - Miss Miller

Within films there are many different production roles that need to be taken control of, different people are assigined specific roles which are capable to their ability in order to create a good quality film. Roles include;

• Producers
• Directors
• Actors
• Director of photography
• Music producer
• Screenplay writer
• Mes coordinator
• Editor

Production roles are used to provide organisation and consistency, everyone knows what role they have and can focus on that specific job. If a certain production member needs to change something or discuss a certain aspect of the film they know exactly who and where to go to do this. This results in the filming and editing becoming less tom consisting, as the film can produced as efficiently as possible. Production roles also allow the film to be consistent as each person knows how to do their job and keep at the same quality throughout, whereas if roles were not allocated then the quality of each job would be non consistent and the film would not be to a acceptable quality.

Within our opening sequence we were all allocated 2 roles each and we share the two remaining roles. My two roles consisted of producer and director, I was appointed these roles because we decided I had the most leadership qualities and was not scared to show authority. As the producer I had to arrange the meeting times and places, as well as assigning the roles of each actor, this meant I had a lot of responsibility and had to spend a lot of time organising each detail of the opening sequence. My other role was director, this meant I had to check each individual clip recorded and decide whether to retake and what to change about each one. I also have to role of over viewing our final piece, once I have I can give my opinion on any changes I feel should be made.

Tom was allocated the role of editor, which meant he had to cut each clip down and place them in chronological order to make each different angle run smoothly into the next one. Once this is done he needs to add in sound and editing styles which will make the opening sequence conventional to a thriller, eg adding in heaving breathing and a heartbeat. This is a very important role within our group, therefore myself and Scott will also be available to help out and attempt to edit our clips so that we have the experience and knowledge on how to do this. Tom was allocated this role because he has experience from editing our preliminary task and he has good technique on how to cut and copy each clip.

Scott was allocated the role of director of photography (camera man) for this Scott had to place the camera in the angles and positions he believed were appropriate to create effect on the scene. We had a camera stand which we could rotate and change heights of the camera, this came in very useful for us to find the right angle to record at. As having such a large responsibility, I also helped Scott with the recording by giving him my opinions and taking it in turns to record. Scott was chose for this role as we believed he was the most creative out of the three of us, he came up with new ideas on how to film the scenes which we believe will benefit our final opening sequence.

For each role that was allocated, there was a reason behind each decision. Reasons behind me being chose for the roles of director and producer was that we all believed I had the most verbal confidence and creative ideas to use whilst filming. As director I told them how to approach each of there tasks and as producer I orangised most of the details for meeting times and settings, I beleieve I did a good job therefore I was the best choice for both of the roles.
Tom was allocated as the actor for the killer, we chose him because he is tall, which is a very conventional quality killers tend to have within thrillers. Tom was also allocated the role of editor, which was because he edited our prelimary task and therefore had the knowledge and skills to edit our material.
Scott was chosen as camera man because we believed he had a good perception as to how we wanted our thriller to be filmed, he contributed a lot to our narrative therefore had a planned view of our opening sequence in hes head. I believe he did a very good job, however I shared the role of director of photography as Scott was busy one day. This could have been a weakness within our filming however I believe it strenghtened our opening sequence as a new perspective on the filming gave our opening sequence a positive effect.