Constructive comments
made by other groups
- Narrative - One of the comments made by the other group was to make the narrative of our thriller clearer, this is because the target audience found that our narrative was not clear enough for them top understand.
- More sound effects - The audience found there was not a wider range of sound effects and found that the ones that are there did not have a great impact on them, feeling that the sound effects should be used for more effect.
- Improved lighting - The other comment we recieved was that the lighting in the final scene was too dark, meaning
that they couldn't see clearly what was happening in the final scene.How we overcame these comments - Narrative - We overcame the narrative problem by adding extra clips to the sequence, this gave the audience more to watch and to help them understand the narrative.
- More sound effects - We overcame this problem by finding more suitable sound effects, especially ones to use during the chase scene as this intensifies the clip which means it would have a greater effect on the audience.
- Improved lighting - We overcame this problem by going out and filming the sequence again at an earlier time, this
meant there was more sunlight which made the scene alot clearer, during this time we was able to make improvements the actual narrative of the sequence.
This post demonstrates some understanding of why audience feedback is essential to carry out, especially when creating a production, aimed at an audience. You have considered some of the comments that you received and you have started to reflect on these comments, but these points need to be explored in a lot more detail, to demonstrate further understanding.
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